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07-20-08

by Ava Blu



forever
was never meant to be added to the words we use;
between us,
around us,


certain words are deadly.


and i know i was the one who asked
for forever,
but i didn't realize

it meant goodbye.


07/20/2008
Posted on 07/20/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jean Mollett on 07/21/08 at 12:20 PM

Hi Jeanna, Great write. Powerful thoughts and emotionals. It has it's own beauty within, yet it's kinda sad too. Saying goodbye to a love. Insight indeed. Leaves us to pick up the pieces and push onward through life. Lots of Hugs.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/21/08 at 02:23 PM

I don't think any of us ever do. Well said on a number of levels. Too many great lines in this to pick just one.

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