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07-16-08

by Ava Blu


i told him not to take it so personally,
that i have been neglecting each thread;

but he wouldn't believe
so i had to cut
loose ends.

07/16/2008

Posted on 07/16/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 07/17/08 at 02:48 PM

Nice.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/17/08 at 03:19 PM

Simple but very effective use of symbolism.

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