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Beauty

by Razel Davies

When beauty lied, God's smile died,
In that instant, the angels cried.
For hope's sake, and life to make,
They took a tear, from the great lake.
With fire's brew, they created something new,
a true beauty, that looked just like you.

06/29/2008

Author's Note: Inspired her beauty.

Posted on 06/29/2008
Copyright © 2024 Razel Davies

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 06/30/08 at 03:58 PM

Nice, especially liked "For hope's sake, and life to make, They took a tear, from the great lake." Could make a good song if expanded. I like it.

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