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many things do
by Jeffrey Parrenas many things do
life and poetry are slipping away
when self respect compromises
all known and unforeseen
and as many things do
body parts become scientific experiments
when mind and body clash
nobody wins
but as many things do
a solution lingers behind closed doors
when finding the key remains
life's constant obstacle 06/23/2008 Author's Note: not good poetry, but I have not written in quite some time, so whatever
Posted on 06/23/2008
Copyright © 2024 Jeffrey Parren
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/23/08 at 03:07 PM ...jeff, this is a great kick-start and tho' i've been away for a few weeks vacating...i see you grow in your words and their use and this pome is a delightful example...love the first line, 'as many things do'...man you could go on forever w/ the concept, eh?...tho you don't think so, i do think this is a good write...charlie |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 06/24/08 at 05:31 AM Hi Jeffrey,
Great write, not bad at all. Powerful thoughts going on here. Keep them coming. :) |
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