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by Maria Francesca

I paint his portrait:
a lovely, empty bottle
that leaves me thirsty

06/14/2008

Posted on 06/15/2008
Copyright © 2024 Maria Francesca

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jim Benz on 06/15/08 at 04:16 AM

I was just looking at an empty bottle a minute ago. But anyways, nice metaphorical connection between the two segments of this haiku

Posted by Julie Adams on 03/15/10 at 03:41 PM

haiku are like poetic Hershey's kisses, and this one is covered in a melancholy powder of cocoa, but no less rich for it...well done, a pleasure to dive into your work today, peace, jewels

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