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alternatives
by Maria Massarella
rainescent sunday
intermittent bursts of gold
- fluid conversations
*m.a
06/08/2008 Author's Note: the word 'rainescent' didn't exist
- now it does
Posted on 06/08/2008
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 06/09/08 at 02:55 AM It is a most excellent word Maria! And I love the idea of fluid conversations! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/10/08 at 06:10 PM It does now, since you made it up. And it fits perfectly into the kind of Sunday I can picture with raindrops glistening in the sunlight that comes gently after the rainfall. They are like diamonds. No one can take them, yet they are for all to see. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/12/08 at 12:52 PM Who ever said 'every cloud has a silver lining' never read this. Maybe it's your accent but I like your alternative a hundred times better. |
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