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by Maria Massarella


rainescent sunday
intermittent bursts of gold
- fluid conversations







*m.a

06/08/2008

Author's Note: the word 'rainescent' didn't exist
- now it does

Posted on 06/08/2008
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laurie Blum on 06/09/08 at 02:55 AM

It is a most excellent word Maria! And I love the idea of fluid conversations!

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/10/08 at 06:10 PM

It does now, since you made it up. And it fits perfectly into the kind of Sunday I can picture with raindrops glistening in the sunlight that comes gently after the rainfall. They are like diamonds. No one can take them, yet they are for all to see.

Posted by JD Clay on 06/12/08 at 12:52 PM

Who ever said 'every cloud has a silver lining' never read this. Maybe it's your accent but I like your alternative a hundred times better.

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