I don't know if you understand how much it hurts me to hurt you how the tear rolling down your face burns through me like acid how walking away from you feels like holding my breath forever I don't know if you know or if it would help if you did but if my suffering eases yours then take it as my parting gift; hold it between your hands and let it keep you warm now that I'm not there and know that my hopes for your happiness are all I have left to warm me in the blizzard of our estrangement.
02/25/2006
Incredible last stanza. Just fantastic.
Very well done. Parting with such sorrow carries with one a long time. Nice write.