once deep asleep i do not expect to take a breath and blow the stone away to walk among you throwing up past regrets instead i'll keep my leave for i do believe regrets and fears are left for those walking over head so tell me now your grudges return to me those i. o. u.s the breeze will blow you a kiss and i'll tear up my u. o. me-s the clock moves quickly now as once it seemed of no importance but on to the sails hoist them to the wind i have miles to travel before i sleep
05/24/2008
I've always liked those last two lines. It captures so much. Used in a good poem, it can be perfect. And I'd say it was pretty damn perfect here.