| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 05/19/08 at 05:33 PM ...genevieve, i think the concept came thru, i too have your feelings of 'somethin' lacking' but this one gets there...i saw segue of phases and stages[of growth] going on during this traipse through a/your life...too i wonder will time wear a heart soft...charlie |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 05/19/08 at 10:44 PM Ah, I know all too well about hearts of stone. My psychologist nicknamed my husband 'The Stone Man'. Thank you for this well written piece. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 05/20/08 at 02:40 AM I think we all know someone like this! I like this concept and your execution here! MFS |
| Posted by Marjorie Anne Reagan on 05/20/08 at 02:48 AM I love the comparisons here. Stone erodes yes in time to sand. Even stone my friend, even stone turns to dust. Wonderful reading this. Thank you for sharing. You struck the "universal chord" here. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/21/08 at 03:23 AM I have to disagree, I don't think it lacked strength at all. The way time softens all things, it's like water - even a gentle flow will wear every edge down to a gentle curvature. I like this alot! |
| Posted by Don Matley on 05/21/08 at 09:14 PM Very strong and very true. I am plagued with very nasty and prolonged seizures.I will think of your words to try and relax me and ease me out from their
terrible effect. Very enjoyable. It seized me greatly in the nice way (ha ha !) |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/23/08 at 02:02 PM Oh, this certainly struck a chord. Lots of truth here. And I like the way you put this on the page. |
