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Just Not Thinking

by Joe Cramer

I was just not thinking properly

Within the scope of any relationship.

What you want and what I desire

Are as different as night is to day.

My feelings always get in the way,

And I end up sounding like a liar.

I know I should stop, just quit

I was just not thinking, can't you see?

05/13/2008

Author's Note: I call this an "Implosion" poem, the rhyme scheme goes in on itself.... thus, abcd then dcba. It's fun to try this with a longer poem, usually I'll just write and see where it goes.....

Posted on 05/13/2008
Copyright © 2024 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Megan Langley on 05/14/08 at 02:00 AM

I felt exactly like this recently with my ex-boyfriend... hence why he is an ex...

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