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Did she exist

by Keith D Allison

Once the warmth of life
now
The words just slip away
nothing to say
 
The fantasy
to ease the pain
time
only fools believe
 
used
frayed
ripped
blistered
 
The words
just slip away
nothing
to say

05/12/2008

Posted on 05/12/2008
Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 05/12/08 at 07:26 PM

Sometimes speechlessness leads to a contemplation that clears the mind. There is much feeling here. Nice job.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/14/08 at 09:04 PM

"used frayed ripped blistered" with one word at a time you express a lot of feeling. Nicely done, smh.

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