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Your Note
by Alison McKenzieYou slipped your note under
A crack in the wall
And a lovely song rushed through
As I opened it,
Absorbed the words,
Grateful,
Better delivery than any bucket,
And the nourishment sank in.
04/29/2008 Author's Note: It's amazing how innocent words of endearment can brighten any cloudy sky! Thank you.
Posted on 04/29/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/29/08 at 04:56 PM ...deep, lovely, just cool!, what a bucket-less gift, eh?...mmm charlie |
| Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 04/29/08 at 07:28 PM i totally get this! you never know how much a kind word means to the recipient. |
| Posted by Kristi Paik on 04/29/08 at 08:59 PM Awww...I really loved this Alison. Simple and wonderful. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/02/08 at 04:09 PM a lot can be said in a note, sweet and succinct. smh |
| Posted by Bertram Sparagmos on 11/09/13 at 04:03 PM Your voice arose to the top of the tones that rushed around... and I became addicted to that sound. =) |
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