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Opacity
by Richard VinceWhen I talk to you, I feel
Uncomfortably transparent,
Even though I have no idea
Whether you really can
See through my words.
Perhaps their true meaning
Is obvious to me only
Because I cannot hide it
From myself.
04/23/2008 Posted on 04/24/2008
Copyright © 2024 Richard Vince
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| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/24/08 at 10:26 PM ...I cannot hide it
From myself 'tis a good thing, that. (I know the feeling, too, that a friend - can they see what I mean?)
Sincerity is becoming so rare, I fear. Beautiful poem, Richard. Real.
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| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/25/08 at 03:50 AM Yeah, you definitely can't help but dig the honesty in this. Good stuff, man. |
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