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the difference between upper and lower case

by Vikki Owens

i feel empty.
i do.
and lonely.
i feel...lowercase i.

YOU walk around in capital letters
and tell me what i should be doing
and where i should be going
and i take care of YOU.
i give and give and give YOU, from mySELF and of mySELF.
and YOU take and take and take into YOURself and for YOURself.

sometimes, in a small voice, i say that YOU are selfish.

and i shame myself by thinking this thing.
i think of other words too, though,
like..
resentful.
bitter.
it figures.

i feel not taken care of.
i feel YOUR will batter against mine.
i feel like i crumble again and again for YOUR love.
i feel invisible to YOU.
except when YOU want to fuck.

and then, in a small voice, i think

fuck YOU.

04/23/2008

Posted on 04/23/2008
Copyright © 2024 Vikki Owens

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ava Blu on 02/12/09 at 03:41 PM

not sure why no one commented on this before, but they're missing out. this is really great and your ending was quite perfect. i always like when people "play" with the format/words.

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