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abuse cloaked in denial
by Ava Blu
she was enough of a reason
to be just a little extra bitter,
but I dont think he noticed;
he was enough of an asshole
to be just a little more than dangerous,
but she still took the bait.
04/17/2008 Author's Note: not even pure crap, just plain crap.
Posted on 04/18/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/18/08 at 01:59 AM I think it's pretty good. Not your best...I'll give you that...but still a nice sharp image. |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 04/18/08 at 08:26 PM I like the parallels... I think a little polish might bring it out. |
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