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abuse cloaked in denial

by Ava Blu







she was enough of a reason
to be just a little extra bitter,


but I don’t think he noticed;


he was enough of an asshole
to be just a little more than dangerous,


but she still took the bait.





04/17/2008
Author's Note: not even pure crap, just plain crap.

Posted on 04/18/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu


Member Comments on this Poem


Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/18/08 at 01:59 AM
I think it's pretty good. Not your best...I'll give you that...but still a nice sharp image.


Posted by Anita Mac on 04/18/08 at 08:26 PM
I like the parallels... I think a little polish might bring it out.

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