abuse cloaked in denial
by Ava Blu
she was enough of a reason
to be just a little extra bitter,
but I dont think he noticed;
he was enough of an asshole
to be just a little more than dangerous,
but she still took the bait.
Author's Note: not even pure crap, just plain crap.
Posted on 04/18/2008
Copyright © 2022 Ava Blu
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/18/08 at 01:59 AM|
I think it's pretty good. Not your best...I'll give you that...but still a nice sharp image.
|Posted by Anita Mac on 04/18/08 at 08:26 PM|
I like the parallels... I think a little polish might bring it out.