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abuse cloaked in denial

by Ava Blu

she was enough of a reason to be just a little extra bitter,
but I don’t think he noticed;
he was enough of an asshole to be just a little more than dangerous,
but she still took the bait.


Author's Note: not even pure crap, just plain crap.

Posted on 04/18/2008
Copyright © 2022 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/18/08 at 01:59 AM

I think it's pretty good. Not your best...I'll give you that...but still a nice sharp image.

Posted by Anita Mac on 04/18/08 at 08:26 PM

I like the parallels... I think a little polish might bring it out.

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