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skipping stone

by Jon-Jacob F Deal

just once
I'd like to find
an idea
like a river-smooth
stone,
warm and round and perfect--
no pann
ing
required;
no sweat
ing,
digg
ing

just the sweet fit of it
in the crook of my finger
and the sure arc of
my sidearm trebuchet elbow,
flinging it away from me

and skip
skip
skipp
ing away,
leaving spreading concentric ripples
on the glassy surface
of the world.

04/16/2008

Posted on 04/16/2008
Copyright © 2024 Jon-Jacob F Deal

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 04/16/08 at 02:51 PM

Great! I collect stones and ideas! MFS

Posted by Elle O'Connor on 04/18/08 at 03:12 PM

This absolutely perfect. Into my favorites also, as well as a POTD vote.What can one say to perfection? You've achieved it.

Posted by Linda Fuller on 07/02/10 at 06:19 PM

popped up randomly - skipping it into my favorites...

Posted by Kristine Briese on 06/14/11 at 03:30 AM

Oh, gorgeous, and somehow chilly.

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