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Loop 42
by Elizabeth SeagoWe were always a rollercoaster,
You and I.
Loops racing around
Shouldn'ts
and
Maybe's.
Could have been's
and
Maybe we shouldn't be here's.
Oh, and I was always so sure of you.
Too sure, too sure.
My body warm beside you,
And all we couldn't bring ourselves to be. 04/13/2008 Posted on 04/13/2008
Copyright © 2025 Elizabeth Seago
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/13/08 at 09:29 PM ...'bring ourselves to be.'
existential yet usual, regular, humans being human...heavy, charlie |
| Posted by David Garner on 04/14/08 at 05:39 PM Beautiful. Love the "Shouldn'ts
and
Maybe's.
Could have been's
and
Maybe we shouldn't be here's." segment especially. Very nicely done! |
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