neil young has this song called "stupid girl" which is one of my favorite songs. the lyrics are so insightful about how so many women are, its sort unbelievable that a man was able to write that song about a woman. this reminds me of that because it taps into the female mind so precisely.

i feel like this really sums up my life in a lot of ways. every stanza here is brutal and pointed and true. the

"death is nothing/if no one knows your gone"

sad because there are a lot of people who are good, worthwhile people and they just get so totally pushed through the crack, left to disintergrate with the dirt at the curbside while others make so much noise. no one ever really sees them or hears them. maybe because so many are so busy with the "what can you do for me" bs or needing all the spotlight on themselves. those people who fall through the cracks deserve so much more. all the innocence in the world that has to suffer.

"With disease more like
a spider bite
The rapist starts to rape herself
No one is hurt intentionally
and if you're touched it's probably love

thats pretty much what 90% of the stuff in my library is trying to say but can't. this is very powerful writing and is probably the best thing you've ever written and the best thing on this entire site. i know you probably didn't mean what i inferred by it, but thats ok.

"Bones are ground into pills" - "bullets learn about remorse" - "The rapist starts to rape herself" - "Death is nothing if no one knows you're gone"... This piece is what? 20 lines long? And pretty much every single one of them is a poem unto themself... This actually kind of reminded me of a song called "Sing", which I suppose makes the title all the more fitting. Anyway, a most excellent work, to put it mildly.