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by Emily Davidson

i find it easy to forget
when i'm in love
that i can still exist
as just one, without him

in moments of passion it is
not who i am
but who we are
and not me, but us

devotion makes so many distractions
from my solitary identity

i have made love a broom
that sweeps the dirt and grime from my life
cleaning everything so thoroughly
that it's gone

04/09/2008

Author's Note: i don't like this poem at all but it's a feeling i wanted to document.

Posted on 04/10/2008
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/10/08 at 02:59 AM

I thought it was pretty good myself.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/11/08 at 05:44 PM

"I have made love a broom... ." Excellent use of analogy. You need make no excuses for this poem.

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