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The Sun
by Joe CramerThe sun now drops down
Into the sparkling of night
The faintest of dreams. 04/02/2008 Author's Note: I found a dozen or so poems I wrote in the summer of 1974, I was a counselor at a Boy Scout camp in Kiln, Mississippi.....
Posted on 04/03/2008
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/03/08 at 02:07 AM Sounds like you got some good material out of that. Especially going on this piece here. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/03/08 at 03:10 AM ...joe, i echo gabe...it is good haiku[a close,very,very,very]close to centuries ago haiku masters, i.e. rumi, issa et al. good one joe, charlie |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/03/08 at 12:24 PM A beautiful start to my morning! I love poems about the Sun. This one just makes me smile. |
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