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Endless Skies

by Jennifer Ragan

Adrift in a sea of endless skies
The sun and the moon each take a turn
Playing the game of hide and go seek

As the sun slides west beneath the Earth
The moon fills the sky with twinkling lights
Adrift in a sea of endless skies
The sun and the moon each take a turn

As the sun seeks the moon, the moon hides
And the moon lets the sun catch a glimpse
Before it fades into another day
Adrift in a sea of endless skies
The sun and the moon each take a turn
Playing the game of hide and go seek

03/29/2008

Posted on 03/29/2008
Copyright © 2025 Jennifer Ragan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/29/08 at 09:33 PM

...okay jennifer, i just happen to like this, sorta seeing it wave from the shore of a large lake...are doing a thingee w/ the same words showing up in the latter lines?...if you are then bammmm-O, you have completed the assignment...when the moon and stars and sun's involved you already got me...i absolutely love this, peace, charlie

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/29/08 at 09:34 PM

...and the hide and go seek! capitol!

Posted by Maria Massarella on 03/30/08 at 12:32 AM

isn't it fascinating!? this game of hide and seek ... beautiful as your moon-sun poem as it twinkles in endless skies...*m.a

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/30/08 at 03:25 AM

Man, two other people grabbed my hide-and-seek thought. Heh. In any case, wonderful wordplay and language. Well done.

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