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Sharing the Heavens (haiku)

by Alison McKenzie

Half shadow moon hangs
Translucent in morning sky
Reluctant to leave

03/27/2008

Posted on 03/27/2008
Copyright © 2025 Alison McKenzie

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Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/27/08 at 03:51 PM

reluctant to leave, such a pinch at the universe, good one allison, and that moon hanging POWEE, good vision! okay? and now let me speak to this honest-to-goodness use of translucent, [like Gomer:] gaaawwwwlllleeee!, this is mmmm. peace, charlie

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/28/08 at 03:59 AM

Nice.

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