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"Poet's Curse"

by Max Phineas

Henry James writes a Portrait of words
Twain sprinkles Sly with a tongue-caressed cheek
Hawthorne's allegory spins heads through and through
And Shakespeare melts pages with floral Sonnet

Whitman hears singing
Hughes Hums sorrow
And Eliot begs for Escape

But I have nothing, save straightforward lines
and Observations too lush not to make

I try to imitate what I don't understand
and make a Fool of the scape

Rhyme seems forbidden, cliché and a sin
But I'm tired of denying its place.

There is no room for blank space
In the brain of a worn word artisan.

03/25/2008

Posted on 03/25/2008
Copyright © 2024 Max Phineas

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/25/08 at 09:46 PM

...and callie you look so young!nahaha so, who wrote this for you? ;-0...one of those people you mention in your pome[sic]? ahem, this is a TALL pome. examples were juuuust the write amt. and write ones(when wanting a 'scape' as you say). mylady my hat is off to you and i bow. this is one worth o' words...i stand in awe...peace, charlie

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/26/08 at 01:10 AM

I like the assortment of writers you run across and the point you bring that back to. Very sharp and very nicely done.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/27/08 at 10:54 PM

wow, I can relate to this...

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