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It's a Love Poem to You

by Deanna M Gritsonis

It started fragile
scared of the feelings
It started slow
with soft kisses
eyes wide with fear
Our bobies new to the touch
Feelings just explored
it was right
my 17 year old body new
fresh
unsure
so long ago
your still mine
I was given a god
I found the passion
Nothing unexplored
still excites my heart
eyes
lungs
lips
even my toes
just press up
and I feel it


This is my love poem to you
years later love flows

03/23/2008

Author's Note: Happy Birthday I still get nervous ;)

Posted on 03/23/2008
Copyright © 2025 Deanna M Gritsonis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Nikki Rice on 04/08/08 at 01:51 PM

I felt those nerves over and over again with my first. It's quite a title to hold. Nice work. :)

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