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thin ice

by Jim Benz

thin ice -
walking to work
in wet socks

03/18/2008

Posted on 03/18/2008
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 03/18/08 at 08:19 PM

I really find many layers and meanings to this. Talking about work, or ice, or how you feel about work or vice versa...very nicely done! ~JPP

Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/19/08 at 03:45 AM

Hehe. A good way to "break the ice" of your writer's block, eh Jim??? Nice!!

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