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wood smoke
by Jim Benzwood smoke
on the wind
a cardinal singing 03/11/2008 Author's Note: I don't know if the seasonal transition comes across in this. does it?
Posted on 03/11/2008
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| Posted by Julie Adams on 03/13/08 at 08:22 PM I'll take Alessandra's lead, it feels springlike to me...or between seasons perhaps, the winds of change...nevertheless, it is a wonderful collection of imagery grouped together...lovely...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 03/14/08 at 06:10 AM Yes, perhaps one of the last wood fires of the season, the smoke being carried away as an afterthought, the bird's song beckoning the spring. |
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