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Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 03/11/08 at 08:38 PM Hi Peter. Great to read you again. This is lovely, and I especially appreciate: "all the world/is/watered/watering/water born/water bred". It seems comforting, and protective as serous to embryo. Thanks.
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Posted by George Hoerner on 03/11/08 at 08:48 PM I love "high above
the hawks fly
in open circles
windward
their prey
praying".
Hawks are so real they hunt for what they need and don't try to disguise it as anything else. Quite beautiful and be there a god he would truely be blessed to be there. |
Posted by Nicole D Gregory on 03/12/08 at 12:35 PM This reminds me of the writings of King David in the books of Psalm. Thougtful and reflective. Yes. God, angels and we people are happy for those days. Thanks for writing this! Its a great reminder to be thankful for creations beauty! ~N |