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small girl with red ball

by Sigurdur Haraldsson

small girl with red ball
a racing car screeching
lucky parents

03/08/2008

Posted on 03/08/2008
Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/08/08 at 01:01 PM

Really tells a whole story in few words! Quite dramatically so!

Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 03/08/08 at 06:10 PM

my heart skipped with the image of possibilities...indeed a great quick write ~JPP

Posted by Julie Adams on 03/10/08 at 08:28 PM

wow, impact! So few lines makes the potency absolute...well done, peace, jewels

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