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Le Veta Pass

by Anita Mac

The sun is swept away
to an opaque gray
where it was clear ten miles ago
and twenty feet ahead
is questionable.

In another ten miles
only the rear-view mirror
bears witness.

03/05/2008

Posted on 03/06/2008
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/06/08 at 05:22 AM

Nice. Especially the end.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/06/08 at 04:43 PM

some times i feel like i'm nothing but a rear view mirror... i really like this. (the poem, not being a rear view mirror)

Posted by Julie Adams on 03/06/08 at 07:26 PM

I love this piece, it says so much about ideas of time, life, change, all coming full circle in so few lines...quite a feat, a pleasure to read, I look forward to reading more down the road (no pun intended)...happy writings, peace, jewels

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