Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 03/04/08 at 08:08 PM Wow, two within one, and it works quite effectively as well. I also like how you used the web-site itself (assuming I took things the right way) as a back-drop to the poem and what's conveyed within it, and from it. The part I especially liked was "designate for their eyes only,
watch the comments percolate,
a paper chain below inflicted language,". Very true... Superb piece all a round. |