reminds me slightly of dante's paradiso. very whimsical and unearthly. mightily spaced and dreamy. well done julie. very well done.

I like the way this is done Julie....CharMin

this is is the work of a mystic who is in the process of becoming the woman she was meant to be - the sublime paint stroking on the canvass of your heavenly sky - the enigma of not really knowing what lurks in this eve and morn you descibe allows me to insert/infer my own constellation of ? what? love? mouring? joy? the gift here is your exsquisite use of our stunning language to air-brush astral dreams - to critque such work - in this case - is pompous and impossible - it is perfect in the eyes of my blurry eyed soul - your other poem - anger - I wanted simple things like separating streelight or ? I think that was what you used - mainly grammer - that was what I wanted to see clearer - that's just me - a third grade education - oh well - what I felt there was a profound love - anger just a guise --you are a unique talent with a future as bright as orion on the fourth of july - 'from this momonet on - thou shall not doubt for a moment that what you are doing is immensely important and gracious and kind and healing and never will the day come when you doubt this' (oooops i believe I just channelled a being to you ) perhaps i am nuts or ... otherwise - i am simply aa guy that wants to help people with vision save our world - i am concieted and hopeful enough to know that I can because I can see - i have the vision - as we all do - to one extent or another- aloha from Hawaii 9 you asked for specifics is critques, I am noyt one who is good at that - I either love or feel off about a piece ) this is the only thing I can say about this piece I just read -it's more than a mouthful but thank you for reminding me to be kind and loving ) and TRUTHFULL Scott