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Deep Years Leaps

by A. Paige White

an extra toast
with twenty four hour glasses
potable sands

surplus salute
twenty four hour glass raised
sans potable

02/29/2008

Author's Note:
frosty grog hops...

 knee deep

playing with leaps and bounds...
 knee deep
thirsty frogs?

 knee deep sweeps



at the drop off, swim!

Posted on 02/29/2008
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 03/01/08 at 06:40 PM

playful beyond my imagination. you could twist this little bitty into about a thousand different ideas and there would still be plenty to flirt with. your mind is a wildfield...i like it. not everyone can think like this.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/03/08 at 02:09 AM

The part after the author's notes is a two voice poem. Great oral read with two voices alternating and joining at the end. Great write!

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