Deep Years Leaps by A. Paige Whitean extra toast
with twenty four hour glasses
potable sands
surplus salute
twenty four hour glass raised
sans potable 02/29/2008 Author's Note: frosty grog hops... knee deep
playing with leaps and bounds... knee deep
thirsty frogs? knee deep sweeps
at the drop off, swim!
Posted on 02/29/2008 Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White
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Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 03/01/08 at 06:40 PM playful beyond my imagination. you could twist this little bitty into about a thousand different ideas and there would still be plenty to flirt with. your mind is a wildfield...i like it. not everyone can think like this. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/03/08 at 02:09 AM The part after the author's notes is a two voice poem. Great oral read with two voices alternating and joining at the end. Great write! |
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