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The Ravine, 1953

by Nancy Ames

"My mother always knew where I was, playing
in the ravine between our house and Grandma's
house, or else rebuilding one of my little
stick-and-cardboard playhouses in the old,
overgrown orchard beyond the ravine, where
there was always the wonderful bitter smell
of black walnuts and plenty pf green apple
ammunition to use against the two brothers
- I forget their names now - who always tore
down my playhouses overnight.

So then I would be very busy the next morning
moving all my stuff to a new location, and then
I would go down into the ravine again, where the
narrow blue water slid easily between the red
clay banks of the stream, and the sounds it made
among the reeds there seemed to contain all the
voices in the world, and I had lots of fun making
little red clay heads and setting them out on the
rocks to dry in the high-noon sunshine, inevitably
to be smashed by those same two brothers again.

And I also remember that every Wednesday evening
after supper I would hold on very tight to my
little sister's hand while we were walking past
the ravine, being careful to stay in the middle
of the road so that the terrible, raving, red-eyed
boogeyman (who lived in the deepest shadows of the
ravine at night) couldn't reach our ankles. We
were on our way to watch Superman on Grandma's
brand-new T.V. set."

02/26/2008

Author's Note: This prose-poem describes a significant historic turning-point when childhood was changed from a free exploration of the natural world and its primitive mythologies to something much more media-controlled. It's sort of autobiographical.

Posted on 02/27/2008
Copyright © 2024 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/27/08 at 05:07 AM

Wow...your ravine was my army barracks home with the coal burning stove and the endless fences between my yard and those that butted up agasinst ours for seeming miles....my look at Superman was to wait another two years, but i remember that too!

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