brushing my teeth (senryu)

by Kathleen Wilson

brushing my teeth
left and right
practicing my shimmy

paper collage
by kathabela wilson


Author's Note: Published in "above the tree line" Southern california Haiku Study Group 2008 Anthology. (my new year resolution--on advice of our teacher. #27 of new year greetings to other haiku poets)

Posted on 02/18/2008
Copyright © 2018 Kathleen Wilson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maria Massarella on 02/18/08 at 09:12 PM

an inspiration! to creativity, dance and anything artistic ... oh. and inspires resolutions, too. Lovely!...*m.a

Posted by Keith McFarlane on 02/18/08 at 10:43 PM

brusha brusha bruuushaaaa -- very cool! Oh, how my electric toothbrush has removed the soul of this cleansing ritual!

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 02/19/08 at 12:47 AM

Love this! Shimmy on, sister!

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