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VDAY

by Deanna M Gritsonis

If we celebrated VDay
I would have you cut your name into me
while making love tied up and gagged

I would smack your face and call you a cunt

choking you as you cum

biting your heated flesh as you press into me

I cry out as you pump as deep as my body lets you

If we celebrated VDay
I would hold still as you pretended to rape me
If we celebrated VDay
I wouldnt talk to you about the other fucks
I would even think about you.

If only we celebrated VDay I would let you cum anywhere.

02/12/2008

Author's Note: I love you.

Posted on 02/12/2008
Copyright © 2024 Deanna M Gritsonis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jared Winkler on 02/13/08 at 05:03 AM

You should send this to Hallmark. Nice work Deanna.

Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 02/13/08 at 05:11 AM

Quite possibly the greatest V-Day poem I've ever read... And I agree with Winkler about the Hallmark thing.

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/13/08 at 05:33 AM

Sounds good to me. Heh.

Posted by Keith McFarlane on 02/13/08 at 06:10 AM

hmmm...I was thinking of getting my wife some chocolates or something...but this poem makes that sound kinda pathetic. How about handcuffs and a ball gag and chocolates? This was a fantastic read ribbed for her pleasure...

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