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weeds

by Ava Blu

i could've been strength for someone
telling them about my life
and letting their weeds be trimmed

but i wasn't one who could leave well
enough alone

you may think i am not happy
because every word is an adjective of another life

and this one doesn't really work

yet i know she is not stronger than me
even when i am unable
to hold onto weeds.

02/11/2008

Author's Note: i don't know.

Posted on 02/12/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/12/08 at 03:57 AM

"but i wasn't one who could leave well enough alone."--I like that a lot.

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