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moving

by Mary Ellen Smith

cardboard boxes yawn open

waiting patiently to be filled. 

a noisy tape gun sends its scratchy peal

through room after room,

and then comes the broom.

 

 

02/10/2008

Author's Note: We are finally on our way soon to Colorado. Thank you Jesus for helping us sell our house in this slow market!

Posted on 02/11/2008
Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 02/11/08 at 07:36 AM

AMEN! Congrats M.E. I wish you and yours a safe move, and a fantastic new start in Colorado. Now we will be neighbors :) Cute poem, ya never know how much 'junk' you have till you move lol.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/12/08 at 01:35 PM

Great use of symbolism and understatement! Moving is really an abominable chore! Wishing you well in your new location. Quite a change from CA!

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