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it's been over . . .
by Ymelda Ramirezlook deep into my eyes
feel the words that i utter
don't mumble on impulse
think hard before you speak
it won't end properly
i need to release
these emotions i've held close
I need you to understand.
No, I mean really understand that this isn't about you.
It's about me.
It's about how you make me feel.
I love you.
Nothing can change that.
But lately,
Well. . . i just dont
no don't say it
It's not about that.
don't let him stir the anger you're trying to control
Your doing it again.
It's really not about you.
Just listen to me for once!
I don't want to argue.
i really don't want to fight
You know what. . .
Forget it.
Fuck it.
I'm done.
IT'S OVER.
Because I can't,
No, I refuse to do this anymore.
I've changed.
You've changed.
It's over.
I'm done.
02/06/2008 Posted on 02/07/2008
Copyright © 2024 Ymelda Ramirez
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 02/07/08 at 02:32 AM There are always some many reasonable things you want to get out, and they never let you... Nice bit here. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/07/08 at 04:06 AM This has a great conversational feel to it. Really interesting and very well done. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 02/07/08 at 01:30 PM This is excellent.... Iloved the flow, and word choice... an outstanding write..... |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 02/10/08 at 05:20 AM going through this exact process right this very moment in my life. i understand this poem to the nth degree and appreciate every emotional sway that's been put into it. almighty goodness ymelda. |
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