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scraping
by Sigurdur Haraldssonscraping the inside
of a frozen car window
snow falls 02/06/2008 Author's Note: My editied entry in the Haiku Project 2008 Jan 27 - Feb 3rd
Posted on 02/06/2008
Copyright © 2024 Sigurdur Haraldsson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 02/06/08 at 11:26 PM Yes. Less is deffinately more. This 'ku grows on me more and more. Love the ambiguity of the last line too. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 02/07/08 at 01:11 AM I can so relate! I can hear scraper on the glass. I like this one. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/07/08 at 05:24 AM Perfect image. |
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