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sunshine
by Jim Benzwhen time
and circumstance
collide
in a clatter of life
yours is the peace
shining
through dark clouds 02/01/2008 Author's Note: a poem quickly sprouted from Maria Massarella's "seeded" - different topic, but I just liked the way she put her language together.
Posted on 02/01/2008
Copyright © 2026 Jim Benz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 02/01/08 at 10:20 PM Thank you, Jim... I am honoured that any word of mine may have sprouted the beautiful of yours. I have often contemplated the art of commenting, and had just today gleaned that for me, the most beautiful comment is to inspire another poem... Methinks you have confirmed this thought of mine. I am gratitudefilled. Grazie* |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/02/08 at 02:36 AM Well done! Yes, life is a clatter, demands upon us both from others and ourselve. Finding the order is sometimes difficult. |
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