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Moving Rooms

by Joe Cramer

So I move into this room,

Another step farther away

From my own reality.

I live my life in little rooms

Going from one to the other.

I never know which way to go,

So I keep moving rooms.

02/01/2008

Author's Note: ... I moved....

Posted on 02/01/2008
Copyright © 2026 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by David Garner on 02/01/08 at 04:39 PM

such a great exploration here. "I live my life in little rooms" creates a lot of haunting images. But it can also be interpreted that you get another step closer to your reality, not necessarily farther away. I love how much you say in so few words. Beautiful.

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