{ pathetic.org }
 

i am not your legendary Eve

by Ava Blu


it isn't that just because you claim it is,
yet somehow everyone's in limbo

[i started to say i'm starting to feel]

we could form a commune of all our favorite people,
but i'm afraid it would only be me;

and i can't have that guilt on my hands

i started to say i am starting to feel
poisonous

and you won't ever bite my apple again

yet you keep running to the tree.

01/30/2008

Posted on 01/30/2008
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/31/08 at 03:50 AM

That's such a good line. Another badass bit of writing, Ms. Cole.

Posted by Anita Mac on 02/03/08 at 07:48 PM

Nice one... Striking, even.

Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 02/09/08 at 06:30 PM

At least you continue to bloom, right?

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)