MexIGO by Johnny CrimsonOddly you glanced up at me
like it was a fuckin weekend
Tear through a set with
half the band intact
Saw a girl get off a bus today
I almost crashed the van I was sitting shotgun in
Shes not his lobster
shes his costar
I wont donate my organs
and I don't vote
................................... That was about me, this is about you.
I want you to be in MY fire pit
I can't believe I knew/know you Cpl. Laurean
I hope they get you fucker
And I hope you write a book before you fry in that great big chair
The one that reminds you that you killed a pregnant woman
and didn't tell your wife
I hope your organs are stretched over your face
and they cut open your stomach
and place in the fetus you destroyed
Sew you up and send you packin
Then maybe you'll have somewhat of an idea
I don't really care man
I'm just shocked that you helped me
You were genuinely nice to me and my boy
when we were checking out the Corps
back in 06
I looked in your eyes
and shook your hand
I got out the Marines
and you raped/cut/burned and buried another Marine
I hope you like dicks
01/25/2008 Posted on 01/26/2008 Copyright © 2024 Johnny Crimson
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/26/08 at 03:29 AM Never a dull moment in your passenger seat, sir. Another good one. |
Posted by Anne Boulender on 01/26/08 at 03:35 AM this is one of the best things you've written so here is some feedback: explain why she isn't his lobster and is instead his costar. i mean not outright, just give us some more clues or something. the dumb among us, the dumb among me might not infer something they should. go sean! |
Posted by Anne Boulender on 01/26/08 at 04:11 AM wow i just reread this, nm that comment i left you. only pay attention to the part where i said it was one of the best things you've written to date. i guess my praise is totally meaningless given the severity of the subject matter. |
Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 01/26/08 at 05:32 AM I don't know if they found that guy, but if they haven't yet then they may never... A shame to say the least. Anyway, yeah, a great piece indeed. |
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