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Validation In Pink & Red (w/ Ava Blu)

by Anita Mac

My insides have turned pink
like Pepto-Bismol or

those little candy hearts

bitter and hard

my stomach convulses
and we're bleeding into magentas


blooms of rotten bulbs
begin to turn

as the world smirks on

I'm pacing a heart-shaped path

into the kitchen tiles
hoping the breadcrumb trail will lead you back


but I won't paint anymore colors
because your voice is the carrot that leads me

so I guess that just makes me an ass.

01/21/2008

Posted on 01/22/2008
Copyright © 2024 Anita Mac

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/22/08 at 02:56 AM

I'd say it was pretty well worth the wait.

Posted by Ava Blu on 01/22/08 at 01:23 PM

I'm SO happy you did it in color!!!! :)

Posted by Ava Blu on 01/23/08 at 03:29 AM

Ok....I want more. I say we start tomorrow...or something... I mostly suck, but I think we have better in us...

Posted by Laura Doom on 01/24/08 at 08:03 PM

...but carrots are also useful for enhancing vision, as demonstrated here (ok, tenuous I know - a pain in the ass, but I mean well :)
No smirking zone...

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