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ANIMAL HUSBANDRY

by Terry Olynik

Sinking
My
Canine teeth,
Into
Your softest parts.

Of
All your lies,
This
Could
Be the worst.

You
Remind
Me
Of
Myself.

01/19/2008

Posted on 01/20/2008
Copyright © 2024 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/20/08 at 04:00 AM

Strong words. Well put.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/20/08 at 07:22 PM

Self-perception is so painful...when the truth about ourselves is seen in others.
*~Chelle~*

Posted by Wendy Sparling on 01/21/08 at 09:47 PM

I wrote a poem simular to this one and realized how it mirrored my behaviour. It was not a nice feeling to self loathe oneself.

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