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I Smelled Lavender When I Expired

by Wendy Sparling


I smelled LAVENDER--when I expired--

The FRagrance in the Sunroom

Was like the Fragrance in the Garden--

Apart the Onslaught of Winter --



The Cries surround--had dried to salt--

And Exhales were quickly stifled

For that last Moment--when our Savior

Approached my bed --in the Sunroom--



I forsook my Treasures --Hand delivered

What relics I found to be

Deliverable--and at that Moment

I inhaled the Lavender--



With Aramaic--questionable hued Varieties--

Between the aura--and my shell--

And then the Garden lights shorted--and then


I could not BE to SEE



07/27/2005

Author's Note: This poem is mirrored from "I Heard a Fly Buzz When I Died" by Emily Dickinson.

Posted on 01/18/2008
Copyright © 2024 Wendy Sparling

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/18/08 at 02:32 PM

Very nice Wendy. This reminds me of something I wrote a couple of years ago and this begs me to do a rewrite. I like this! Thanks!!!

Posted by JD Clay on 02/06/09 at 11:17 PM

Emily has nothing on you, Wendy. In fact this is much more pleasing to the senses. I really like the last line too. Though the scent still lingers on.

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