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The Ocean`s Daughter

by Nancy Ames

"That girl's eyes loved gazing into water,
in her doubly delightful vision,
but he was still learning the liquid language,
and there's danger and there's damage,
there's envy and derision,
when you love the ocean's daughter.

So he told this girl that of course he had
been in love once but that girl had
turned out to be a mermaid and he couldn't
swim or even go overboard and sink down
to where her eggs were lying like multitudinous,
enticing pearls slowly drifting away
on the luminous white sand
at the bottom
of the blue lagoon.

He didn't really like the water very much,
I guess... so anyway what this girl told me
was that after that he always, ironically,
had the blues, like a deep glinting reflection
in his eyes, like the distant echo
of a soprano saxophone in his ears...

The first time this girl met him, apparently,
he turned to her and said, "What did you say?"
and forced a smile politely to his lips,
his lips that would never kiss an
earth-woman or taste the flower-sweet air
that floats through her, although she may
have any number of his wistful, wondering
children clinging to her skirts while
her tears flow endlessly back to the sea."

01/15/2008

Author's Note: This is about the weird and wonderful mental maneuvers some people go through to avoid commitment.

Posted on 01/16/2008
Copyright © 2026 Nancy Ames

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/16/08 at 03:47 AM

I'd love to see this in short story form. I dunno. It's very much a poem here, but it also has that short story energy running through it. Good stuff.

Posted by Joe Cramer on 01/17/08 at 04:03 AM

Well done!

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