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[Library] Just A Warning
by Nikki RiceBelief is to Faith
as You are to Me;
I'm blind and you're not -
you have evidence. You see.
I feel myself tripping
then falling then BOOM!
And when she goes down, folks,
she takes out a room. 01/15/2008 Posted on 01/15/2008
Copyright © 2024 Nikki Rice
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Coleman Demiurge on 01/16/08 at 04:45 AM I like this a lot. It's like an ambiguous little nursery rhyme (though all nursery rhymes are ambiguous to me) with a rather excellent ending... Very well done. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/18/08 at 05:31 PM Nikki, what an excellent metaphor for love. With the rhyme and the brevity of the poem, it's light and whimsical.
*~*Chelle*~* |
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