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Senryu: Yells at putter

by A. Paige White

yells at putter
strings that break - noise noise noise
boys with a motor

01/12/2008

Author's Note: How they can be entertained at a motor attached to
N O T H I N G
I have no idea.
footnote: I am informed it is their new invention:
The total body vibrator
Their fortune is made.

Posted on 01/12/2008
Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/12/08 at 10:18 PM

...like any 'ru' sen or hai or otherwise, each line can be/is a complete visage and this is no different...i can see the yelling, and noise X3 and then those two boys completing the rockwellian nostalgia graph...good one paige, peace, chaz

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