Wow Callie. An A+ for style alone. The "I am" is relentless and appropriate in the form. A punctuation to each section of the "Mould".

Callie your perspective poem reminds me that we see ourselves in relation to those around us and our environment. Sometimes, it's so difficult to see ourselves just in our own perspective. Then again, we live in this world and that's our identity.
~Chelle~

dude...I don't know why I never commented on this before...I really like it!